WHEREAS, the intent of the CRL to provide a forum for the improvement of bills was honorable, and
WHEREAS, this can be achieved with a longer stay in the Hopper and without that extra body.
THEREFORE, be it enacted that the Ziu of the Kingdom of Talossa enacts the following changes in El Lexhatx:
H.2.1.5 through H.2.1.6.2 are repealed in their entirety:
2.1.5. For each Cosă term is created a Comità da Redacziun Legislatïu (in english Legislative Advisory Committee), hereinafter "the CRL", which shall review or revise all legislative items from the Hopper once they have moved to committee; and may recommend acceptance or rejection , or suggest amendments in their best judgment.
2.1.5.1. The main, but not exclusive, purpose of the CRL, with the assistance of the Scribery, shall be to evaluate bills from the technical point of view of the quality of the legislation, the correctness of the language, the internal consistency of the document and consistency with existing legislation.
2.1.5.2. The CRL shall conduct all its deliberations openly in the Hopper.
2.1.5.3. The CRL shall consist of the incumbent Mençéi, Túischac'h, and Avocat-Xheneral.
2.1.5.3.1. The Mençéi, Túischac'h, and Avocat-Xheneral may at any time appoint and dismiss one Senator or one Membreu dal Cosă, to serve as a member of the CRL in their place.[716]
2.1.5.4. The CRL may create further committees to which their functions may be delegated, as concerns any bill or category of bills. Such a committee must have at least 3 members, including at least 1 Membreu dal Cosă and 1 Senator.
2.1.6. After the CRL has given its recommendation, or if it gives no recommendation within 30 days of the bill having passed to committee, the bill has passed the Hopper and the sponsor of the bill may ask for it to be Clarked, with or without amendments.
2.1.6.1. The same bill can not be submitted to the Clark more than once in the same Cosa, unless the original bill was vetoed, the original bill had been retired or voted down by its main sponsor during the voting period, or the bill has been substantially amended, as judged by the Secretary of State.
2.1.6.2. Bills must be submitted to the Secretary of State more than 24 hours before the publication of the Clark. Bills received less than 24 hours before publication of the Clark shall be published in the next Clark or postponed for one Clark, at the Secretary of State's discretion.
The current H.2.1.3 and H.2.1.4 are deleted and replaced with the following:
2.1.3 A bill is said to have passed the Hopper and the sponsor of said bill may ask for it be clarked after satisfying both of the following conditions: It has spent at least 20 days in the Hopper, and at least two of the following officers (Mençéi, Túischac'h, and Avocat-Xheneral) have expressed that they have no objections after reviewing the bill from the technical point of view of the quality of the legislation, the correctness of the language, the internal consistency of the document and consistency with existing legislation; or it has spent at least 30 days in the Hopper without a recommendation from the above-mentioned officers responsible for review. For the purpose of the review described above, the Mençéi, Túischac'h, and Avocat-Xheneral may at any time appoint and dismiss one Senator or one Membreu dal Cosă, to serve as a reviewer of the Hopper bills in their place.
2.1.4 The same bill can not be submitted to the Clark more than once in the same Cosa, unless the original bill was vetoed, the original bill had been retired or voted down by its main sponsor during the voting period, or the bill has been substantially amended, as judged by the Secretary of State.
2.1.5 Bills must be submitted to the Secretary of State more than 24 hours before the publication of the Clark. Bills received less than 24 hours before publication of the Clark shall be published in the next Clark or postponed for one Clark, at the Secretary of State's discretion.
Uréu q'estadra så:
| 60th Cosâ, Clark #6 results | Amendment? | Ziu | Cosâ | Senäts | |||||||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Bill | Title | Result | Për | Contrâ | Abstain | Result | Për | Contrâ | Abstain | Result | |
| RZ21 | The Edited Whole Hopper Act | No (double majority needed) | Fail | 0 | 0 | 0 | Fail | 0 | 0 | 0 | Fail |
| RZ21 | The Immigration Reform (No Minister's Pets) Bill | No (double majority needed) | Fail | 0 | 0 | 0 | Fail | 0 | 0 | 0 | Fail |
| # | Name | Province | Party | Seats | RZ21 | RZ21 | VOC |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 358 | Antaglha Xhenerös Somelieir | Atatûrk | FreeDems | 20 | - | - | |
| 182 | Baron Alexandreu Davinescu | Maritiimi-Maxhestic | PROG | 5 | - | - | |
| 568 | Bentxami Puntmasleu | Vuode | FreeDems | 20 | - | - | |
| 557 | Bråneu Excelsio | Fiova | COFFEE | 20 | - | - | |
| 208 | Breneir Tzaracomprada | Florencià | OPEN | 20 | - | - | |
| 222 | Flip Molinar | Benito | IND | 5 | - | - | |
| 277 | Litz Cjantscheir | Cézembre | IND | 20 | - | - | |
| 328 | Lüc da Schir | Benito | 0 | - | - | ||
| 444 | Marcel Eðo Pairescu Tafial | Maritiimi-Maxhestic | FreeDems | 20 | - | - | |
| 551 | Mic’haglh Autófil | Benito | PdR | 10 | - | - | |
| 114 | Miestrâ Schivâ | Fiova | FreeDems | 20 | - | - | |
| 547 | Muhammed Yasir | Atatûrk | OPEN | 10 | - | - | |
| 315 | Munditenens (Dien) Tresplet | Maricopa | DIEN | 20 | - | - | |
| 152 | Sir X. Pol Briga | Cézembre | PROG | 5 | - | - | |
| 562 | Þerxh Sant-Enogat | Cézembre | PROG | 5 | - | - |
| Province | # | Name | RZ21 | RZ21 |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Atatûrk | 101 | Martì-Páir Furxhéir | - | - |
| Cézembre | 260 | Glüc da Dhi | - | - |
| Florencià | 61 | Mximo Carbonel | - | - |
| Maricopa | 494 | Þon Txoteu É. Davinescu | - | - |
| Maritiimi-Maxhestic | 466 | Ian Plätschisch | - | - |
| Benito | 298 | Iason Taiwos | - | - |
| Vuode | 550 | Tric'hard Lenxheir | - | - |
| Fiova | 96 | Gödafrïeu Válcadác'h | - | - |
WHEREAS the recent reforms to immigration emphasising "quality over quantity" raised valid concerns about the Immigration Minister having too much discretion;
AND WHEREAS a possible form of abuse of discretion would be for the Immigration Minister to petition for grants of citizenship and to expect "favours" from new citizens in return;
BE IT ENACTED that El Lexhatx E.7 be amended by the insertion of the words in bold:
7. The Secretary of State shall, on a date of his choosing, but within a period of ten days after receiving a petition from at least two citizens, neither of whom shall be the Minister of Immigration or anyone to whom they have delegated their powers, to issue a Grant of Citizenship as described in clause 4, and upon certification from the Ministry of Immigration that the prospective citizen has sufficient understanding of Talossan life and culture for full participation determine the provincial assignment of the prospective immigrant and issue a Royal Grant of Citizenship to the immigrant. This Grant shall be issued under the Royal Seal, either as applied by the Chancery, or, should the Majesty request, by the Sovereign under his or her own hand. If requested by the Government, the Grant may also bear the signatures of the Seneschal and/or Immigration Minister. The Royal Grant shall be promptly issued coincident with the candidate affirming his fealty to the Royal House and his allegiance to the Kingdom by taking any Oath of Talossan Citizenship specified by law. At the time this Royal Grant is issued, and from that point forward, the applicant shall be a full citizen of the Kingdom of Talossa. The fact of the issuance of this Grant shall be posted on Wittenberg by the Secretary of State, that the new citizen may be welcomed by his compatriots. Any and all objections raised to the immigration made after this Royal Grant will be moot.
Uréu q'estadra så:
| 60th Cosâ, Clark #6 results | Amendment? | Ziu | Cosâ | Senäts | |||||||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Bill | Title | Result | Për | Contrâ | Abstain | Result | Për | Contrâ | Abstain | Result | |
| RZ21 | The Edited Whole Hopper Act | No (double majority needed) | Fail | 0 | 0 | 0 | Fail | 0 | 0 | 0 | Fail |
| RZ21 | The Immigration Reform (No Minister's Pets) Bill | No (double majority needed) | Fail | 0 | 0 | 0 | Fail | 0 | 0 | 0 | Fail |
| # | Name | Province | Party | Seats | RZ21 | RZ21 | VOC |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 358 | Antaglha Xhenerös Somelieir | Atatûrk | FreeDems | 20 | - | - | |
| 182 | Baron Alexandreu Davinescu | Maritiimi-Maxhestic | PROG | 5 | - | - | |
| 568 | Bentxami Puntmasleu | Vuode | FreeDems | 20 | - | - | |
| 557 | Bråneu Excelsio | Fiova | COFFEE | 20 | - | - | |
| 208 | Breneir Tzaracomprada | Florencià | OPEN | 20 | - | - | |
| 222 | Flip Molinar | Benito | IND | 5 | - | - | |
| 277 | Litz Cjantscheir | Cézembre | IND | 20 | - | - | |
| 328 | Lüc da Schir | Benito | 0 | - | - | ||
| 444 | Marcel Eðo Pairescu Tafial | Maritiimi-Maxhestic | FreeDems | 20 | - | - | |
| 551 | Mic’haglh Autófil | Benito | PdR | 10 | - | - | |
| 114 | Miestrâ Schivâ | Fiova | FreeDems | 20 | - | - | |
| 547 | Muhammed Yasir | Atatûrk | OPEN | 10 | - | - | |
| 315 | Munditenens (Dien) Tresplet | Maricopa | DIEN | 20 | - | - | |
| 152 | Sir X. Pol Briga | Cézembre | PROG | 5 | - | - | |
| 562 | Þerxh Sant-Enogat | Cézembre | PROG | 5 | - | - |
| Province | # | Name | RZ21 | RZ21 |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Atatûrk | 101 | Martì-Páir Furxhéir | - | - |
| Cézembre | 260 | Glüc da Dhi | - | - |
| Florencià | 61 | Mximo Carbonel | - | - |
| Maricopa | 494 | Þon Txoteu É. Davinescu | - | - |
| Maritiimi-Maxhestic | 466 | Ian Plätschisch | - | - |
| Benito | 298 | Iason Taiwos | - | - |
| Vuode | 550 | Tric'hard Lenxheir | - | - |
| Fiova | 96 | Gödafrïeu Válcadác'h | - | - |